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asimmetrix

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Technically it's pefect.

 

But I find that her 'hair action' does not align with the classic and stable background. Her in herself in say a studio would be fun. But on that background she should be classic too.

 

The shadowline from sun on her is also not so good. Probably something she will notice herself and make her - I would suspect - not really want to use the picture. Women tend to want to be perfect. Ahm... Or at least look perfect.

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Agree on the hair, but maybe that's the charm here....

 

One thing else to consider. Make sure both hands are visible in the shot. It's not too bad here, but in many cases people look like they have lost a hand to a terrible accident.

 

Also encourage your models to 'soften' the hands and the arms, no stress, as the flexing makes the picture look unnatural and in many cases adds the appearance of 20 lbs

 

Peter

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Thanks to all for the comments.

 

Some other info...

 

The flat scanner is an old entry level model from Canon. The photo is printing on Ilford Multigrade FB with a Leitz Focomat V35.

The FP4+ film was processed in two baths Pyrocatechol developer.

 

Nat

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