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Almost abstract. I think hte composition would improve with framing less on the RHS or more on the LHS so that each petal ring is either fully in or fully broken. I like the tones and the gritty finish.

 

The only other thing, I tried really beasting the curves to increase the contrast and depth and extent of the blacks. Different picture. Maybe worht experimenting with.

 

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Rob,

I agree with you in regards to the framing.

It was a quick spur of the moment shot. The only one I took, and I didn't really frame it.

 

The plant belongs to my mother, so I can always have another go.

 

If you wouldn't mind posting what you came up with in this thread, that would be swell.

 

 

Here is the same file, curves, cross process.

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Philip -

 

You really are not spending enough time here. More please.

 

In the B&W it takes on the quality of a rose with rolled petals to seem as moisture laden as a succulent. Really quite lovely. As Rob states, I too wondered about the same image a bit lighter and with a bit more contrast.

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