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Experimental in East London, M240, 50 Lux pre-ASPH, comments welcome

 

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Well I really like #1 - very seedy. Ambiguous look on the girls face. The ominous shadow of the person to the left and the graffiti to the right frame the photo perfectly.

 

Don't like #2 - can't see her face and that man's shadow to the left is gone. Have you pushed the sharpening/contrast a bit on #2 - might add to the grit if #1 was treated similarly, and just a bit more green tint in #2 to add to the seedy/sickly look.

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agree with MarkP

 

the first shot is excellent... she is clearly looking after someone who is being ill in the doorway... Her hand is resting on his/her back... although at first you can't really see anything going on... you wonder who or what she is... and then you realise you are making assumptions and it makes you question yourself about those assumptions. The shadowy figure to the left supports the initial seedy look to the scene... an excellent and fortuitous capture. 

 

The composition is pretty much perfect too... and in three dimensions. There is also a compositional ine going from top left to bottom right which adds tension to the whole image. I would love to have got this shot...! :)

 

the second picture has no story and is pretty dead... sorry... just not in the same league...

 

wonderful first shot though... one I will remember a long time...

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