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John, exactly as Pierre-Olivier said, the light in the lanterns is beautiful...All around the light is great. Only one thing....IMHO if the boy with the white shirt with the stripes was a little darker the photo wouldn't have competing aspects. Does that make sense? I mean that the sun is giving light and everything is tinged with its warmth, while the white t-shirt, however darkened and in shadow it is seems to be just a touch too vibrantly white....

JE

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Guys,

 

thanks for your comments - this was just a quick snap taken as we were returning from the Biennale. It's a crop from the fully zoomed-in C-Lux original, so the effective focal length would be about 200mm full frame equivalent.

 

Jonathan, I agree with your critique and attach an amended version.

 

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Thanks again.

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John, I think it works a lot better now. With the shirt darker the space between the lanterns on the right and the one (beautifully lit) lantern on the left is cleaner, unobstructed. This is a wonderful photo.

JE

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