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Altar Boy


jmr

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Hi John,

nice scene: the boy alone in the huge cathedral.

Technically I think the photo too plain. I would expand the tone range, and I would correct colours, put out some yellow and magenta. You might then even get out some pattern of lines in the window.

 

Regards,

Astrid

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Agree with the others about the composition, use of space etc. but could you not have darkened in the window a little as the eye sees that area first and the altar boy last.

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Thanks for the feedback everyone,

 

unfortunately the windows are completely blown; the interior was rather dark. The colours are the closest I could get to those I remembered seeing at the time.

 

Thanks again.

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