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Hi Reiner,

 

A few things that I really like about your picture: B&W, The details left and right of the lady, the expression and posture of dog & master, the cold stone bench with the

graveyard feel. However, I do think that the picture would be much stronger with significantly less DOF. The background simply detracts too much from your lovely couple.

 

Kind regards, C.

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Reiner, i like this image but it needs some alterations to it IMHO. It's a bit slanting to the left, easily fixed. Secondly, it needs to be cropped from the top, getting rid of the sky and from the right side up to nearly the bag, so the subjects are not centrally positioned in the frame. Last, and this is important, it's a bit on the darkish side.There is more detail to be shown in the lady's eyes and around her legs.If i had to adjust this image, i'd brighten the mid tones, then burn where desired.

Best Azzo

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