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MP 35/1.4 ASPH Kodachrome 64

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Hi Paul, try cropping into a vertical format leaving all the necklace of the younger one in showing and slightly more than her hand of the same girl on her sister's shoulder without the olderone's arm showing. A tight crop but nice picture of your lovely daughter's, and see if it works for you this way. Best Azzo

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Sorry, but for me, this is spoiled by the fact that the one on the right isn't in focus.

 

Andy--You have GOT to be kidding! This is an absolutely beautiful portrait. I know it's just a personal and subjective opinion, but I don't see how the very slight softness caused by a shallow DOF could possibly be a detractor from such a nice photograph.

 

Lovely photograph in my opinion.

 

Cheers

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Andy--You have GOT to be kidding! This is an absolutely beautiful portrait. I know it's just a personal and subjective opinion, but I don't see how the very slight softness caused by a shallow DOF could possible be a detractor from such a nice photograph.

 

Lovely photograph in my opinion.

 

Cheers

Why would I be kidding? One girl is clearly out of focus.

 

I didn't say it wasn't a beautiful portrait.

 

I just think that another stop would have made the difference between a photograph with one daughter out of focus, and a photograph where both siblings were in focus. Call me old fashioned if you like, but I like portraits with the eyes in focus.

 

Seems only fair to both girls and a perfectly reasonable comment.

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Thank you everyone for taking time to comment. I really appreciate the critique.

 

Azzo, below is a crop as you suggested, I like the suggestion.

 

Andy, I am also in agreement with your comment on focus. With the rivalry that sometimes goes on with these two, both faces should be equally in focus. I shot at 1.4 trying to get the background, which was ugly, to go away, looking back f2 probably would have been the better choice.

 

Vic, yes K-64 is beautiful, I had forgotten how it feels to view a color slide on a projector screen. Even though it is digitalized, I feel it still retains some of its character. Compared to some digital pictures I see - I like it better, it's not as antiseptic.

 

My desire to shoot Kodachrome 64 comes from a recent visit to my father's house. I came across a large box filled with color slides shot when I was a kid in the 1960s with a Leicaflex and 50mm 'cron. There was a old Kodak projector in the box so I set everything up and we looked at long forgotten family memories. The color was amazing. I decided I wanted to leave some of the same behind for my girls when they are grown. Hopefully they too will find the memories warm. The picture at the bottom is the 'old man' with the Leicaflex (though the picture, a crappy one, was taken with a D2).

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