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[mikozia]

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T w/Super-Vario-Elmar-TL 11-23 ASPH.

[jaapv]

On this forum we do not retaliate against posts we do not like. We call in a moderator. Fighting is prohibited.

As for critiquing photographs, there is a right way and a wrong way. The wrong way is to rubbish them.  The right way is to first tell what you like and then suggest improvements. If there is nothing that you like, there is nothing to critique.

Additionally, I would advise to prefer quality over quantity when posting. One great shot will do more than a flood of lesser ones. If you post an image about which you feel unsure, request critique. Tell us about the circumstances and the reason you feel it should be shown to the world despite imperfections.

[jaapv]

For this image, I like the idea of creating layers in the image in the traditional wide angle fashion. I also like the attempt to create depth by a high-key second layer. The framing of the lady and the moment of the button-push are good.
I do feel the wall should be less prominent. If it only took up one-third of the image  by pointing the camera to the left it would be clear what the main subject is. I am sure you would have created a third layer on the left. Crop off the CCTV camera, it pulls the eye away.
It is unfortunate that DOF does not include the main subject. Use a smaller aperture and hyperfocal distance. The attempt to sharpen has created halos and other artifacts. If I were you I would return there and wait for another opportunity.

[fotografr]

All I can say is that finding merit where none exists is beyond my capacity for niceness.

Edited July 31, 2021 by fotografr