Untitled (Lisbon)

[siraf72]

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[stuny]

Very nice.

[abrewer]

Charming. The facial expressions are priceless.

[siraf72]

Very nice.

 

 

Charming. The facial expressions are priceless.

 

 

Thank you both

[Ari Kfir]

 

Great moment to catch but this photo is super mediocre.  Regretfully I couldn't find at the moment a similar shot made by myself (remember it very well) that I considered not good enough to publish, but I can give you some examples of my work which by the personal standards is not up to the publishing level.

 

Meanwhile, please remember that the negative feedback and critique, keep this world stumble, supper science and art. Positive feedback is very often destructive.

[siraf72]

Great moment to catch but this photo is super mediocre.  Regretfully I couldn't find at the moment a similar shot made by myself (remember it very well) that I considered not good enough to publish, but I can give you some examples of my work which by the personal standards is not up to the publishing level.

 

Meanwhile, please remember that the negative feedback and critique, keep this world stumble, supper science and art. Positive feedback is very often destructive.

 

 

Fair enough. Obviously the composition leaves a lot to be desired, but I felt the expression on the girl in the centre makes up for that a bit. At any rate, thanks for taking the time to give me your feedback. 

[Ari Kfir]

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Fair enough. Obviously the composition leaves a lot to be desired, but I felt the expression on the girl in the centre makes up for that a bit. At any rate, thanks for taking the time to give me your feedback.

 

Respected colleague, thanks for the understanding. Best wishes to you. 

BTW, I just found my own shot mentioned earlier.  Couldn't figure how to attach it to this note, thus may just post the photo.

[Ari Kfir]

OK, got it! The file mentioned is attached.

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[rpittal]

 

I like the tension associated with the framing and the depth of stuff going on in the background; real world brought together by the main subject and bubble.

[IkarusJohn]

OK, got it! The file mentioned is attached.

I also prefer the tension of the original post over this image. It contains spontaneity this image lacks. This second image is, by comparison, boring and almost looks staged.

[Ari Kfir]

I also prefer the tension of the original post over this image. It contains spontaneity this image lacks. This second image is, by comparison, boring and almost looks staged.

Nope, Mr. Ikarus, the shot, made in a Barcelona street certainly was not stage, it is your biased personal perspective. But, as mentioned earlier, I didn't consider it good enough to show.

[siraf72]

I like the tension associated with the framing and the depth of stuff going on in the background; real world brought together by the main subject and bubble.

 

 

You've hit the nail on the head when it comes to what I like about the shot. I think there's always a potential tension between composition and capturing spontaneity up close. 

[me111]

I, too, like the original image more. It might not be perfect from a technical point of view, but it tells good stories.

PS. I think it's time to clean your sensor.

[siraf72]

I, too, like the original image more. It might not be perfect from a technical point of view, but it tells good stories.

PS. I think it's time to clean your sensor.

 

 

Thanks! and yes my sensor does need cleaning ...