JE Posted June 12, 2007 Share #1 Â Posted June 12, 2007 Advertisement (gone after registration) iiif Summitar 50mm Thanks for looking, Comments welcome Jonathan Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted June 12, 2007 Posted June 12, 2007 Hi JE, Take a look here Perspective/geometry. I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
Sandokan Posted June 12, 2007 Share #2 Â Posted June 12, 2007 A lovely composition of geometry. Â I would be tempted to put a border around this when showing to differentiate the greys of the photo from the background of the page. Also, maybe it would be stronger if you cropped a little off the left - near to the black of the mirror edge. I dont know, it is just a suggestion. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted June 12, 2007 Share #3 Â Posted June 12, 2007 Jonathan - Â Very nice near-abstract with very effective geometry. Too bad the local processing harms your images, but that will be behind you, soon. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JE Posted June 12, 2007 Author Share #4 Â Posted June 12, 2007 Thanks Ravi and Stuart... Ravi, I'll try the crop when I have some more time... Jonathan Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
visiondr Posted June 17, 2007 Share #5 Â Posted June 17, 2007 Spot on framing and exposure. I like the composition very much. Well done. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JE Posted June 17, 2007 Author Share #6 Â Posted June 17, 2007 Thanks Ron... I, too, really like this composition, but I wish the grays were a little darker, just a touch darker to highten the contrast...I suppose I could adjust the levels...Glad you like it. Jonathan Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
PhotoArchival Posted June 20, 2007 Share #7 Â Posted June 20, 2007 Advertisement (gone after registration) Very nice perspective Jonathan. Abstract cool... Maybe needs a bit of punching up, but I see the photo regardless. So will you be leaving Colombia any time soon? I remember you mentioning it... Â Amado Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JE Posted June 20, 2007 Author Share #8 Â Posted June 20, 2007 Amado, gracias por tus commentarios...yo tambien pienso que la foto necesita un poco de "punching up." Quiero que los negros sean mas negro, que haya mas contraste... ya estamos in los E.E.U.U. buscando trabajo....tal ves nos vemos en Chicago! Jonathan.... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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