Gibbo Posted December 8, 2015 Share #1 Posted December 8, 2015 Advertisement (gone after registration) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted December 8, 2015 Posted December 8, 2015 Hi Gibbo, Take a look here Coffee in Koblenz . I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
XVarior Posted December 8, 2015 Share #2 Posted December 8, 2015 Very nice B&W and composition. Like it a lot. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted December 8, 2015 Share #3 Posted December 8, 2015 Lovely. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Neil Macmillan Posted December 9, 2015 Share #4 Posted December 9, 2015 Great, but I do so much want to crop out the piece of wooden railing on the left. Maybe make the frame line half way between that and the left edge of the frizzy hair of the subject in the picture on the wall. Could even remove the coat hanger in the top right corner. That would concentrate the attention on the trinity of the two coffee drinkers and the figure in the art. And if we could time the shot for when someone is rushing by on the street ... OK, maybe not that; but as is, it's a nice slice of life moment and well executed, technically. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iduna Posted December 9, 2015 Share #5 Posted December 9, 2015 Great, but I do so much want to crop out the piece of wooden railing on the left. Maybe make the frame line half way between that and the left edge of the frizzy hair of the subject in the picture on the wall. Could even remove the coat hanger in the top right corner. That would concentrate the attention on the trinity of the two coffee drinkers and the figure in the art. And if we could time the shot for when someone is rushing by on the street ... OK, maybe not that; but as is, it's a nice slice of life moment and well executed, technically. I agree with Neil. your picture is a fine attempt, the frame is nice. But where is the story? The story probably is not the furniture but the 2 ladies in juxtaposition to the picture on the wall. So a crop just along a line benath the seats could help to bring the emphasis further up to the ladies. Toning and light a very nice to convey he atmosphere of the place. Thanks a lot for sharing this sample for a good discussion. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gibbo Posted December 9, 2015 Author Share #6 Posted December 9, 2015 Thanks for your comments, folks! Food for thought! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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