Hans-Peter Posted September 26, 2015 Share #1 Posted September 26, 2015 Advertisement (gone after registration) Welcome, dear visitor! As registered member you'd see an image here… Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! Link to post Share on other sites Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! ' data-webShareUrl='https://www.l-camera-forum.com/topic/250560-piano-player-open-air/?do=findComment&comment=2894593'>More sharing options...
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pop Posted September 26, 2015 Share #2 Posted September 26, 2015 Die Konzentration der beiden Hauptpersonen ist - meine ich - gut illustriert. Mir würde der Ausschnitt besser gefallen, wenn Du gleich rechts vom Ellbogen der Fotografin abschneiden würdest. Damit wäre die dunkle rechte untere Ecke und die Rucksackträgerin oben rechts elegant entfernt und die Person mit dem Heiligenschein, den ich als Anspielung an die Frisur des Pianisten sehe, bekäme eine dominantere Stellung im Bild. Hast Du das Bild getönt? Der Farbton sieht an meinem Monitor nicht sympathisch aus. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hans-Peter Posted September 26, 2015 Author Share #3 Posted September 26, 2015 Right. It's better that way. Welcome, dear visitor! As registered member you'd see an image here… Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! Link to post Share on other sites Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! ' data-webShareUrl='https://www.l-camera-forum.com/topic/250560-piano-player-open-air/?do=findComment&comment=2894604'>More sharing options...
pop Posted September 26, 2015 Share #4 Posted September 26, 2015 Thank you, I think this is much better. Sorry, I hadn't realizied that you had posted in the international part of the forum. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Posted September 26, 2015 Share #5 Posted September 26, 2015 sony_3-1.jpg Right. It's better that way. piano_hoch-1.jpg No, the first photo presents more open-air atmosphere. For an upright piano the second format might fit, but since he plays a grand piano, one should also be able to see the width thereof. At best, a reduction to a real square format would be more appropriate to the first photo. Concert grand and Rolleiflex format - that work together. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted September 26, 2015 Share #6 Posted September 26, 2015 In the second version, quite lovely. In the first the tone and lack of contrast were the bigger detractors. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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