insomnia Posted September 17, 2012 Share #1 Â Posted September 17, 2012 Advertisement (gone after registration) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted September 17, 2012 Posted September 17, 2012 Hi insomnia, Take a look here Dancing Girl with Broom. I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
stuny Posted September 17, 2012 Share #2 Â Posted September 17, 2012 Delightful. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bateleur Posted September 18, 2012 Share #3 Â Posted September 18, 2012 Lovely capture of a lovely moment! Â Regards Charles Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
insomnia Posted September 18, 2012 Author Share #4 Â Posted September 18, 2012 Thanks, I'm really happy with this one Just the two modern cars are a bit off Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stonearabiapix Posted September 18, 2012 Share #5 Â Posted September 18, 2012 crop them out. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted September 18, 2012 Share #6 Â Posted September 18, 2012 A great shot. Â Perhaps if you crop out the cars at the top and a bit of the left side it would make it just a little stronger. Â Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
insomnia Posted September 18, 2012 Author Share #7 Â Posted September 18, 2012 Advertisement (gone after registration) Thanks for your suggestions, I think by cropping it loses too much of the surroundings and I also like the line of stones on the left, the downcoming truck as a "threat" to the scene is lost and so on. Â She however, is stronger when cropped. Gee, I don't know Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bateleur Posted September 19, 2012 Share #8 Â Posted September 19, 2012 Interesting change to the effect of the picture. While my eye tends to run up out of the picture in the new crop, the girl is enhanced, though I feel the dramatic air of the original full frame image is lost though. Not an easy call! Â Regards Charles Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Her Berger Posted September 19, 2012 Share #9  Posted September 19, 2012 Interesting change to the effect of the picture. While my eye tends to run up out of the picture in the new crop, the girl is enhanced, though I feel the dramatic air of the original full frame image is lost though. Not an easy call! Regards Charles  d'accord. I think the first image is the best one. It don't need a crop.  just my 2 cents  Glück Auf  A Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted September 19, 2012 Share #10 Â Posted September 19, 2012 While I think your cropped version makes the child the center of attention (I would have cropped out the auto wheel at the top of your revised picture), If it was your intent to use the background elements as a part of the image, by all means do so. It is a fine picture without the crop. Â Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
insomnia Posted September 19, 2012 Author Share #11  Posted September 19, 2012 Thank you all for your comments and suggestions. I will keep it as is in #1 - just showed the crop to visualize my concerns. I printed it in A3 today and it works splendid  Regards, Michael Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hsw Posted September 19, 2012 Share #12  Posted September 19, 2012 Thanks, I'm really happy with this one Just the two modern cars are a bit off   In 20 years, when people are still looking at this delightful image, the cars will no longer be modern. This is a delightful image as it stands. Sometimes we try too much to emulate the feel and era of HCB; but this is our time, we should document it as it stands.  Henry Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
BlackDE Posted September 19, 2012 Share #13 Â Posted September 19, 2012 Great shot! Where is this? Â Bernhard Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
insomnia Posted September 20, 2012 Author Share #14  Posted September 20, 2012 In 20 years, when people are still looking at this delightful image, the cars will no longer be modern. This is a delightful image as it stands. Sometimes we try too much to emulate the feel and era of HCB; but this is our time, we should document it as it stands. Henry  Thanks for that very kind comment, made me smile, standing on a veeery packed train back home  @BlackDE it's Istanbul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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