defektive Posted November 26, 2011 Share #1 Â Posted November 26, 2011 Advertisement (gone after registration) This is my first image in the photo forum. As a developing (no pun intended) photographer all comments and constructive criticism are most appreciated. Â Cheers, Sam Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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likalar Posted November 26, 2011 Share #2 Â Posted November 26, 2011 Sam, this was a strangely timed image to open, especially after another turkey leftover meal. ;-) Seriously, nice shot! It has an eery "art installation" feel to it. Â Larry Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
defektive Posted November 26, 2011 Author Share #3  Posted November 26, 2011 Sam, this was a strangely timed image to open, especially after another turkey leftover meal. ;-) Seriously, nice shot! It has an eery "art installation" feel to it.  Larry  Sorry, I forgot about you fellows over there enjoying your Thanksgiving celebrations . This little cockatoo would have struggled to satisfy anyway. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted November 26, 2011 Share #4 Â Posted November 26, 2011 Sam, Â A fine shot with the lovely tones, composition (suspicious how all the parts are so well preserved in place) and the sharpness. Â Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Michael Hiles Posted November 26, 2011 Share #5 Â Posted November 26, 2011 Sam, Â I am going to risk being offensive, since you ask for comments and criticisms. I like your picture a whole lot. The balance between pictorial and graphic makes it very interesting. But I think it can be improved- I think it lacks "punch" due to low-ish contrast. I have taken the infernal liberty of monkeying around with your image and coming up with... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
defektive Posted November 27, 2011 Author Share #6  Posted November 27, 2011 Sam, A fine shot with the lovely tones, composition (suspicious how all the parts are so well preserved in place) and the sharpness.  Paul  Thanks Paul, I must admit that I did have a hand in bringing the bird "back to life" .    Sam, I am going to risk being offensive, since you ask for comments and criticisms. I like your picture a whole lot. The balance between pictorial and graphic makes it very interesting. But I think it can be improved- I think it lacks "punch" due to low-ish contrast. I have taken the infernal liberty of monkeying around with your image and coming up with...  No offense taken Michael, your version of the image makes a lot of sense to me. I did have a little play with the contrast before posting it but found I was losing too much detail in the skull. I'll have a further fiddle when I get a chance. Thanks for taking the time to help out.  Sam Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted November 27, 2011 Share #7 Â Posted November 27, 2011 Advertisement (gone after registration) Sam - Â Please post photos more often, You clearly have a fine vision. and I agree with Michael about adding punch. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
defektive Posted November 28, 2011 Author Share #8 Â Posted November 28, 2011 Sam -Â Please post photos more often, You clearly have a fine vision. and I agree with Michael about adding punch. Â Thanks Stuart, will do. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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