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petert531

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Peter -

 

Considering your title, unlike Ivan (whose criticsism I find most reliable) I think the red works on the hair, forehead and nose -- It suggests a police car flasher at the scene of the crime. All three work for me with the soft lighting an interesting counterpoint to the harsh situation. The crop on #3 and the somewhat unlikely arm position also suggest a crime scene, but the "police photographer" clearly has an artisitc sensibility to go along with his documentation mission. By chance, do you have #3 without the crop? I only wonder because from the lower face it appears that this angle is superb for your model. Like Ivan, I want to see the images bigger, though I understand your wanting to have us view these on a continuum to tell the story. Perhaps in later postings of this type you could do the small continuum followed by the separate, larger images.

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Controlling of the red light was the tough lesson I learned, I am not sure about the light all over the place.. I find these pictures work best as a story, individually, less impactful.

I REALLY want to try out wet with colours, just light I see on the roads on a rainy night...magic.

 

Peter

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Macabre but interesting and bold if that was the intention ... my immediate thoughts were "good exercise for a murder story book cover" ... could have potential for same with the attractive 'femme fatale' ... especially if some ketchup was included plus a murder weapon ;)

 

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