Bob Jackson Posted May 5, 2010 Share #1 Posted May 5, 2010 Advertisement (gone after registration) M8 f5.6 35mmCV[ATTACH]201261[/ATTACH] Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted May 5, 2010 Posted May 5, 2010 Hi Bob Jackson, Take a look here White Horses. I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
stuny Posted May 5, 2010 Share #2 Posted May 5, 2010 Bob - I like the moment and composition but I feel this would be stronger punched up just a bit, and then maybe sharpened a bit. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
rolu Posted May 5, 2010 Share #3 Posted May 5, 2010 I agree 100%. And maybe lighten the horses? - adding drama/ mysticism? Great picture! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted May 5, 2010 Share #4 Posted May 5, 2010 Bob, A great shot with wonderful composition and moment. I agree with Stuart's suggestions though. Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
albert Posted May 5, 2010 Share #5 Posted May 5, 2010 Bob, My wife, and I, like it so it must be very good. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Jackson Posted May 5, 2010 Author Share #6 Posted May 5, 2010 Here it is again with some revisions. [ATTACH]201321[/ATTACH] Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted May 5, 2010 Share #7 Posted May 5, 2010 Advertisement (gone after registration) Bob, Definitely an improvement. Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
allamande Posted May 6, 2010 Share #8 Posted May 6, 2010 I am going to suggest somewhere between the two versions. What grand creatures these are! Ece Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Jackson Posted May 6, 2010 Author Share #9 Posted May 6, 2010 Thanks for everyone's comments. Maybe somewhere in the middle is a good idea allamande, I'll try it. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted May 6, 2010 Share #10 Posted May 6, 2010 Bob - Much better, and now it almost lives up to its potential. As Ece suggests, dialing it down just a touch will make it perfect. BTW: They look white, but are correctly referrred to as "gray"horses since they are not albino. No doubt our friend Virgil knows that. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
vdb Posted May 7, 2010 Share #11 Posted May 7, 2010 That's right Stuart...these look like grey Arabs. Where was this Bob? I can't picture this spot. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bob Jackson Posted May 7, 2010 Author Share #12 Posted May 7, 2010 Virgil,it was on 550, just past Rich's place. They were Arabians. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
vdb Posted May 8, 2010 Share #13 Posted May 8, 2010 Bob, here's my version with CS4. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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