Doc Henry Posted January 18, 2009 Share #1 Posted January 18, 2009 Advertisement (gone after registration) Last year I went at the Salon of the photo at Paris with my new M8 for the first time I have this girl as model at Samsung stand Beautiful lady Thank you for looking and comment Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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Doc Henry Posted January 18, 2009 Author Share #2 Posted January 18, 2009 and the picture of this beautiful model sorry Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert_parker Posted January 18, 2009 Share #3 Posted January 18, 2009 Doc That's an unusual pose but you've separated her from the background beautifully and I like the balance of tones Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
vdb Posted January 18, 2009 Share #4 Posted January 18, 2009 Great detail, love the make-up. Agree this is an unusual pose. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Martin T-M Posted January 18, 2009 Share #5 Posted January 18, 2009 Henri, I could say "un ange passe...". Very well done. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted January 18, 2009 Share #6 Posted January 18, 2009 Henri - Beautiful for moment, subject background, detail, light and color. I think it would benefit from a bit of crop on the left and top, such as this: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Henry Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share #7 Posted January 19, 2009 Advertisement (gone after registration) Henri - Beautiful for moment, subject background, detail, light and color. I think it would benefit from a bit of crop on the left and top, such as this:Stuart,It's better .Thank you Sometimes, we just need a little change to change one picture ! Thanks also to Robert,Martin,Vdb and Stuart for looking and comment It's a real encouragement for me Thanks to all of you Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
mark_goode Posted January 19, 2009 Share #8 Posted January 19, 2009 An unusual pose to be sure but one that says a great deal. Very well seen and captured. Thanks for sharing this with us. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_reinierv Posted January 19, 2009 Share #9 Posted January 19, 2009 I'm sorry but think the light is absolutely horrible, the crossing shadows below the neck... and the over-exposures on the breast, face and nose Furthermore the background could be darker to more emphasize the model. A single softbox would have done the trick here. Are you just starting with lighting? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Henry Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share #10 Posted January 19, 2009 I'm sorry but think the light is absolutely horrible, the crossing shadows below the neck... and the over-exposures on the breast, face and noseFurthermore the background could be darker to more emphasize the model. A single softbox would have done the trick here. Are you just starting with lighting? Reinier, Thanks for your comment greatly appreciated I understand what you mean. As i said above,we are in bad condition of light with a flood of lights in this Samsung stand . A lot of people are present during this Salon and "shooted" this model,so i am sorry for the over-exposure Can you do something in "post-treatment" ? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_reinierv Posted January 19, 2009 Share #11 Posted January 19, 2009 no, over exposure is usually dead pixels Now I know the circumstances batter, than indeed it is very difficult to get things right, Now I also understand the skintone my advise: turn it to B&W, lift up the whites with levels so they become greyish Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Henry Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share #12 Posted January 19, 2009 Thanks Reinier for your answer So i propose you an other pose of this model, but in b&w as you suggest May be it's not perfect Thanks for looking (a little crop) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
rubenkok Posted January 19, 2009 Share #13 Posted January 19, 2009 beautiful model Hi Henri, Yep you are right Ruben Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Henry Posted January 19, 2009 Author Share #14 Posted January 19, 2009 Thank you Ruben for looking and comment and thanks Reinier for your suggestion Best regards Henry Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_reinierv Posted January 19, 2009 Share #15 Posted January 19, 2009 aha yes, already better...only problem is that the shadow is unbelievable this way but it is a good attempt This is my effort, took me about 10min. Most crucial parts is dodged the face but slightly burned the nose. burned the lighter front shadow, dodged the darker shadow a bit, smudged that darker shadow into the lighter shadow. Smudged the darker shadown towards the shoulder Finally made it a duo-tone. You have to play a little with duotone but I like panatone 465C and play a bit with the curves it is still not perfect I know... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted January 19, 2009 Share #16 Posted January 19, 2009 Henri - Reinier has transformed it. Exquisite in B&W with the rich tones. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
imported_reinierv Posted January 20, 2009 Share #17 Posted January 20, 2009 btw that 2nd shot is unsharp, not really usable in my edit I now see that the forehead still isn't very well It is something I learned but still don't do it myself: when you have a picture you like put it away for 1-2 days a look at it again. Very often you see flaws you didn't see the first time. finally lighting directly from above works very rarely, the shadows become weird so you have to know exactly what your doing when you use it Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Doc Henry Posted January 20, 2009 Author Share #18 Posted January 20, 2009 Yes Stuart you are right : deep black and white picture Thanks Reinier for the correction and "master" treatment and Stuart for looking and comment Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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