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cheewai_m6

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I like you picture, and I think it has more possibilities.

 

At the risk of intruding, you could turn this into a more powerful picture. Eliminate the sky and everything except the subject, and shoot straight on to the principal plane of the wheel carriage. You decide how much to include, but use the geometry of the castings. It has the makings of a strong graphic image, rather than a contextual picture of railroad leftovers. In fact, there ay be many pictures here.

 

Hope you are not put off - you invited comments so I thought...

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I like you picture, and I think it has more possibilities.

 

At the risk of intruding, you could turn this into a more powerful picture. Eliminate the sky and everything except the subject, and shoot straight on to the principal plane of the wheel carriage. You decide how much to include, but use the geometry of the castings. It has the makings of a strong graphic image, rather than a contextual picture of railroad leftovers. In fact, there ay be many pictures here.

 

Hope you are not put off - you invited comments so I thought...

 

 

I agree that there are other possibilities but I still think this is a very interest shot in its own right. I too might reduce the area of sky. But I still think it is an interesting and well taken subject as it is.

 

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