markforce Posted June 16, 2016 Share #1 Posted June 16, 2016 Advertisement (gone after registration) M246 / 50Lux Welcome, dear visitor! As registered member you'd see an image here… Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! Link to post Share on other sites Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! ' data-webShareUrl='https://www.l-camera-forum.com/topic/261670-lunch-on-park-ave/?do=findComment&comment=3062822'>More sharing options...
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A miller Posted June 16, 2016 Share #2 Posted June 16, 2016 Is your camera black with a red dot? If so, i migt have seen you yesterday morning at around 7:40am on Park...? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
roelandinho Posted June 17, 2016 Share #3 Posted June 17, 2016 Not balanced. My eyes go to the bottom-right which is not the intention. Why not make this a vertical shot with only the left part? Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
roelandinho Posted June 17, 2016 Share #4 Posted June 17, 2016 Not balanced. My eyes go to the bottom-right which is not the intention. Why not make this a vertical shot with only the left part? Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk I also think you could change your position to get more spatial separation between the peoples legs, making them stand out more as the subject. Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
markforce Posted June 17, 2016 Author Share #5 Posted June 17, 2016 I also think you could change your position to get more spatial separation between the peoples legs, making them stand out more as the subject. Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Yeah, taking a step or two to the right to allow for more separation there could have improved the photo and might have resulted in a horizontal 'dangling feet' shot right there. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted June 17, 2016 Share #6 Posted June 17, 2016 I like it as it is. If you're still in town we should meet. stuart.nordheimer@opco.com. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
lmans Posted June 17, 2016 Share #7 Posted June 17, 2016 Advertisement (gone after registration) I don't mind the shot 'as is'....yes, a bit on the right side your eyes go with that open space, but....the idea that I like in this shot is the 'long' row of legs dangling that stretches for infinity. If you took a step to the right, would you not lose that feeling of infinity? jim Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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