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Claudio_martins

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Claudio -

 

It's a mystery to me why nobody has commented on this. I really like the gracefulness of the subjects, the focus and toning. However, I suggest cropping the top to remove the rope or wire, and cropping the right to the middle of the column, moving the lovers off center, thereby increasing the tension of the moment.

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Not sure if this is posed or candid ... if it was posed, then cries out for a passer by to be walking past and glancing at them ... to make the picture more interesting and to tell more of a story. As it is, the rope in the background is distracting and the couple are too central ... And the title immediately makes me think of Rodin's work ... bit of an unfair comparison.

 

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