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Mark,

 

I can go on about your wonderful pictures (and this is another one!), but then you only get the "well done", "good shot" and other positive noises.

 

So with all positive intentions and BECAUSE I respect you and your work: for this picture to be a winner (for me, I'm sure other people will have other thoughts :D ) I'd want two things:

 

- composition: the guy (it's not you chasing her, isn't it:p ) should be one step more to the back, so she'll be " on herself".

- exposure/tonality: I'd really love to see her face. Her whole attitude is "busted", but I'm sure her face will depict that even more.

 

So there.

 

Marco

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