louloumum Posted May 9, 2010 Share #1 Posted May 9, 2010 Advertisement (gone after registration) M8 - 50mm Summilux Thanks for looking ! Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted May 9, 2010 Posted May 9, 2010 Hi louloumum, Take a look here Water lilly and gold fish. I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
mitchell baum Posted May 10, 2010 Share #2 Posted May 10, 2010 I like this a lot. I wish I could see it all at once and not have to scroll to include all of it. I'm curious about the dark edges and dark vertical area on the right. Not sure if they help or not. A very nice photo. Best, Mitchell Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
louloumum Posted May 10, 2010 Author Share #3 Posted May 10, 2010 Thanks a lot for the feedback Mitchell, I really appreciate you took the time to look and comment I see what you mean about the framing that's a bit off in the right side. Will have to run it through processing once again ! Thanks for pointing to this flaw that I hadn't noticed myself.... Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
albert Posted May 10, 2010 Share #4 Posted May 10, 2010 Marie-Louise, The flower and the fish are worth saving........I would love to see it again after you fix it up a bit. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
allamande Posted May 10, 2010 Share #5 Posted May 10, 2010 Marie-Louise, This is lovely, like a painting. One idea is to do some cropping, it seems to have a natural diagonal split between the fish and the flower, it might be worth experimenting with that, cropping from the upper and the right edge. It has a wonderful airy feel to it. Ece Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted May 11, 2010 Share #6 Posted May 11, 2010 Marie-Louise, This is lovely, like a painting. One idea is to do some cropping, it seems to have a natural diagonal split between the fish and the flower, it might be worth experimenting with that, cropping from the upper and the right edge. It has a wonderful airy feel to it. Ece Marie-Louise, A lovely shot other than what has been pointed out. Cropping might be an alternative but am afraid the change of composition may not be an improvement. Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
louloumum Posted May 11, 2010 Author Share #7 Posted May 11, 2010 Advertisement (gone after registration) Al, Ece & Paul Thank you very much for the kind words ! I'll work a little more on it - also trying different crops to see what is best... I really appreciate the feedback Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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