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michali

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Funny guy! Certainly has an expression on him.

The composition could use some work. Maybe it's the crop...have you anymore space on the right hand side taking him off center? Also, the pants are starting to look a bit muddy on my monitor, maybe a bit more contrast would help with that w/o sacrificing the whites.

 

Amado

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Excellent job, obviously great for expression. I do agree with Amado regarding the pants, but I like the angle and composition...in fact I might even crop tighter (for my taste)...

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Stuart- Thank you for your comments. Yes I've been doing some traveling, no comms. At times it's great to be away from everything and be incommunicado.

 

Paul and Virgil- Thank you, as always much appreciated.

 

Funny guy! Certainly has an expression on him.

The composition could use some work. Maybe it's the crop...have you anymore space on the right hand side taking him off center? Also, the pants are starting to look a bit muddy on my monitor, maybe a bit more contrast would help with that w/o sacrificing the whites.

 

Amado

 

Amado- Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback. There's no room on the right, as he was sitting in a very narrow alleyway and I cropped out the wall.

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