pop Posted July 6, 2009 Share #1 Posted July 6, 2009 Advertisement (gone after registration) M4, Elmar 1:2.8/50mm Thanks for looking; comments are welcome Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted July 6, 2009 Posted July 6, 2009 Hi pop, Take a look here The Vitra Center . I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
stuny Posted July 6, 2009 Share #2 Posted July 6, 2009 Pop - This is delightful for composition, geometry, detail, light and color, but it seems a bit veiled or dull. I tried adding some shadow and highlight slider action for this version: Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JE Posted July 6, 2009 Share #3 Posted July 6, 2009 Just cleaned up the sky a bit...hope you don't mind... Jon [ATTACH]150907[/ATTACH] Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
vdb Posted July 7, 2009 Share #4 Posted July 7, 2009 Excellent! This is a great example of how this forum works. You had a great idea with a fine original image, then Stuart made it excellent and Jon turned it into an exceptional image. I love it when that happens:) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pop Posted July 7, 2009 Author Share #5 Posted July 7, 2009 Stuart - Thank you for your assessment. For once, the original version of the image comes closer to the subject than your spruced-up version. Nonetheless, what it lost in fidelity it gained in 'punch'. Thanks again. Jon - Thanks for calling those ugly scars to my attention and for showing to me that they can be mended. It seems that they damaged the negatives in the lab. Virgil - I quite agree. I am learning here so fast that I will overtake HCB somewhen this coming autumn. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
soleforeal Posted July 9, 2009 Share #6 Posted July 9, 2009 Nicely cropped and nice flow to the geometric shapes. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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