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Charming and lovely for subject, selective focus, light and color. I think it would be a bit stronger with one or two inches cropped from the left, putting more open space in front of where the little girl is looking.

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Mjw. WOW.. beautiful portrait. you did it all right and nailed it.

 

Two things... the image seems a bit greenish on my monitor. Im with Stuart on the space in front of the face.. its a motion thing, we don't like the idea of almost bumping into the edge of the space. (generally)

 

I messed with your image and did a conservative crop and a bit more aggressive, personally that kid rocks, and I would go for the tight crop.

 

2009-05-22-portrait-crop-a.jpg

 

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Welcome to the Forum.

 

Charming and lovely for subject, selective focus, light and color. I think it would be a bit stronger with one or two inches cropped from the left, putting more open space in front of where the little girl is looking.

 

 

I agree with Stuart. What a lovely portrait. To be treasured for years. You really nailed it although the suggested cropping might improve it even more.

 

Paul

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