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On 6/22/2021 at 4:21 PM, Henry Taylor said:

Louis, in your dreams she's smiling  waiting for you,  but sadly in  real time  doesn't look that good for you . 😪

👎👎👎 (I think he's doing just fine in real life Henry.)

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In my impression, the first works very well, since the "focal-plane shifted bokeh" still keeps a very nice smile.

The second has excellent tonal control, but from the look on her face it could be a good moment to have a break. As a side note, since the strap of her handbag aligns with the tree behind, it looks like she is hugging a tree stem.

Stefan

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Stefan, thank you very much for your very constructive feedback.

As I explained before, I was just playing around with the first shot.
I was not crazy about the second shot, the reason why I did not post it in the first place. As you mentioned, her expression was not very appealing, but what bothered me the most was her hand back on her shoulder. It was crushing her puffy sleeve and making a weird shape of her shirt. :)

 

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