Popular Post dkmoore Posted July 4, 2020 Popular Post Share #1 Posted July 4, 2020 Advertisement (gone after registration) M10M + 50 Same model as prior picture. Criticism/tips welcome. Welcome, dear visitor! As registered member you'd see an image here… Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! 21 Quote Link to post Share on other sites Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! ' data-webShareUrl='https://www.l-camera-forum.com/topic/311083-bw-portrait-2-b-in-philly/?do=findComment&comment=4003559'>More sharing options...
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Leica28 Posted July 4, 2020 Share #2 Posted July 4, 2020 No criticisms. Excellent shot overall. Low angle looking up is creative. Lighting is soft & natural. A real winner. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwpics Posted July 4, 2020 Share #3 Posted July 4, 2020 Really nice! If you are using Lightroom it may be an idea to lighten the eyes with the 'Iris Enhance' brush. Gerry 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
mjrp Posted July 4, 2020 Share #4 Posted July 4, 2020 Well that's a beautiful shot, any comments are entirely personal because it's your shot but for me, scrolling down the page, it's even stronger as a 5x4 crop with the top gone, I don't think it adds anything. Either way, a beautiful young woman who you have done complete justice to, I wish I'd taken it. Mat 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkmoore Posted July 4, 2020 Author Share #5 Posted July 4, 2020 5 hours ago, gwpics said: Really nice! If you are using Lightroom it may be an idea to lighten the eyes with the 'Iris Enhance' brush. Gerry I didn’t know there was such a tool and I have been using LR for my entire photography life (about 9 years). Ha! Thanks you. I’ll do some google and YouTube. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
gwpics Posted July 5, 2020 Share #6 Posted July 5, 2020 19 hours ago, dkmoore said: I didn’t know there was such a tool and I have been using LR for my entire photography life (about 9 years). Ha! Thanks you. I’ll do some google and YouTube. It really is very simple. Go: Develop > Brush > Effect > Iris Enhance. You may be surprised at what else is there! Good luck! Gerry 1 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
StS Posted July 11, 2020 Share #7 Posted July 11, 2020 Advertisement (gone after registration) Excellent portrait, very good use of selective focus Stefan 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkmoore Posted July 12, 2020 Author Share #8 Posted July 12, 2020 Thank you to everyone who has taken the time to view, like, and comment on the image! Hope you all had a nice weekend. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
fotografr Posted July 13, 2020 Share #9 Posted July 13, 2020 (edited) I'm a bit late to the game here but would like to add my compliments on a really nice portrait. You nailed it. The one minor criticism I have is to perhaps try to avoid bright OOF objects in the background which can pull attention away from your beautiful model. Edited July 13, 2020 by fotografr 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
dkmoore Posted July 24, 2020 Author Share #10 Posted July 24, 2020 On 7/5/2020 at 2:57 AM, gwpics said: It really is very simple. Go: Develop > Brush > Effect > Iris Enhance. You may be surprised at what else is there! Good luck! Gerry I followed your directions and I do not see Iris enhance. I even used the search function. I'm using LR classic with the latest update. Maybe this is in photoshop? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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