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On the port of Essaouira 2018


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Good one. The composition is well thought out and works nicely.

Kid on the right third with his head roughly at the intersection of thirds, horizon on the top third, fisherman on bottom third, and you have a triangle forming between kid, fisherman and boat. I'd probably crop a bit tighter on the right, to eliminate the person at the rightmost, which is half cropped anyway and distracts more than contributes to the composition.

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Stuart, Giannis, thanks for your comments. I personally would keep it as is as I like the continuity of the head of the first kid with the arms of the second and all the three heads form another additional triangle on top of what you have already mentioned. Cropping would put the kid with the bike too far to the edge. Appreciate the discussion .

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