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[pauledell]

Ali,

 

A nice shot with the overall sharpness, tones and treatment of the flowing water. I would suggest cropping about a fourth of the bottom of the picture. I find that area somewhat uninteresting.

 

Paul

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Paul,

Thanks for your comment and suggestion about the cropping.

In that case, I believe the mass balance of the picture will be spoiled between the "static" areas (pebbles) and the "dynamic" areas where water brings a painterly effect in lighter tones. This effect is stronger on the closer areas where the speed is more perceptible.

I understand it is difficult to see all this in the small web picture.

I have printed a bigger version at home which I believe, is more satisfactory for supporting what I wrote above.

I really appreciate your open comments on this.

Ali

[janlu]

Of your three offerings , this is my favorite , though it was interesting to see all your different approaches !

 

Thanks , Gianluca

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Gianluca,

Thanks. I must confess it is all experimental.

I was trying to capture the violence of the smallest water movements and contrast it with the static of the what remains on the shores.

I also like this picture and no 3 most.