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Michael,

 

A delightful shot with excellent composition, tones and clarity. This reminds me of a famous picture of the man jumping over a puddle taken by HCB. My suggestion about composition would be to crop the bottom of the picture up to the drains where the bricks change direction.

 

Paul

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Transitive and ephemeral moments captured can not be assigned to standard rules of composition that are applied to more static scenes. This is a fine image. I am not in disagreement with Paul's advice but stating the rules of composition are more just guidelines IMO.

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Transitive and ephemeral moments captured can not be assigned to standard rules of composition that are applied to more static scenes. This is a fine image. I am not in disagreement with Paul's advice but stating the rules of composition are more just guidelines IMO.

 

I agree with Karl's point. After reviewing your picture I reduced the size appearing on my screen so I didn't have to scroll to see the whole image, I can see that your version offers more depth probably what you intended it to be.

 

Paul

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