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M8 Elmarit 28mm Asph

 

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Many thanks Stuart.

As proposed I reduced slightly the brightness and clarity of the blue boy's face. Please tell me if this is too much or not enough.

 

I am still asking myself if I should have put the focus on this blue boy instead of the red boy. Your though would be highly appreciated.

 

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I like the second version. Where to put the focus - you wouldn't think it was such a difficult question, but it is. However, with this one, the closeness of the grouping and the 28's DOF I think provide adequate coverage. It isn't one of those pictures where the audience is likely to look and think, "Oh, if only he had focused on x instead of y...." It's a good picture.

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