elmarman Posted October 23, 2012 Share #1 Posted October 23, 2012 Advertisement (gone after registration) Taken in Inayawan Market area, Cebu, Philippines -- I saw the Juxtaposition of the men against the poster -- they did not notice what I was taking. 1986 M6 + 1966 Canadian 35mm f1.4 Summilux, 2005 outdated Konica VX200 film rated at 100 ASA Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted October 23, 2012 Posted October 23, 2012 Hi elmarman, Take a look here Men and Girls !. I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
azzo Posted October 23, 2012 Share #2 Posted October 23, 2012 In this case, I would have preferred your framing being concentrated on the two-girl advert and the man on the right. IMHO, the man on the left not only doesn't add but, it's as though you've two images in one. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted October 23, 2012 Share #3 Posted October 23, 2012 I agree with Ivan. With that change the photo is much stronger. 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
elmarman Posted October 23, 2012 Author Share #4 Posted October 23, 2012 thanks -- I will do a 16x12" RA4 darkroom print for my Club -- let us see if the Judge agrees with you ! Wish me luck ! 1 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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