Adji.AP Posted November 2, 2011 Share #1 Posted November 2, 2011 Advertisement (gone after registration) Comments and opinion appreciated. Thank you. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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StS Posted November 3, 2011 Share #2 Posted November 3, 2011 Difficult to say, I have the feeling this image has more potential. The focal plane draws the eye to the flowers, on the other hand part of them are cropped out and the salesman in the background is still rather present. So my eyes have some trouble deciding where to look at. Maybe its just me. Stefan Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Adji.AP Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share #3 Posted November 4, 2011 Stefan, Thank you for your keen and deep thought. Perhaps this is an example of failure of deciding Point of View and composition. Another shot from the same location. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
StS Posted November 5, 2011 Share #4 Posted November 5, 2011 Actually, I like the second one much more. This gives a clear story to me now, focussing on the man doing his business. Literarily speaking, the man is now the Subject, the flowers the Object, if you excuse the analogy. But please take this, as every advice, with a pinch of salt, this is very strongly a matter of personal taste. Stefan Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted November 5, 2011 Share #5 Posted November 5, 2011 I far prefer #2 also. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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