sblitz Posted October 31, 2011 Share #1 Posted October 31, 2011 Advertisement (gone after registration) comments welcome, as always [ATTACH]285422[/ATTACH] Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Advertisement Posted October 31, 2011 Posted October 31, 2011 Hi sblitz, Take a look here girl on a bus . . . dreams?. I'm sure you'll find what you were looking for!
pauledell Posted October 31, 2011 Share #2 Posted October 31, 2011 An excellent shot of the young girl dreaming of when she will be old enough to have boy friends and a cell phone. Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Timmyjoe Posted October 31, 2011 Share #3 Posted October 31, 2011 Wonderful image. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
tmldds Posted October 31, 2011 Share #4 Posted October 31, 2011 Very nice candid photo. Tri:) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
hoppyman Posted October 31, 2011 Share #5 Posted October 31, 2011 A well seen and made photograph. I do find the very bright areas of bag, jacket and cap to the right to be a little distracting. I might try a tight crop around the main subjects as another option? Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted October 31, 2011 Share #6 Posted October 31, 2011 Steve - Terrific. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
sblitz Posted November 1, 2011 Author Share #7 Posted November 1, 2011 Advertisement (gone after registration) thank you all for your kind comments .... the brightness around the edges came from doing a reverse vignetting ... if i get a chance later i will post the photo without vignette. steve Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Alberti Posted November 2, 2011 Share #8 Posted November 2, 2011 Very nice. I like the contrast with the lady next to her, who does seem bored to hell with life. What a fresh look of the girl, right into her future. Good use of BW too. albert Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
sblitz Posted November 3, 2011 Author Share #9 Posted November 3, 2011 thank you all for your comments -- here is a slightly different version to ponder. i think it is better but would like to hear from all of you. for the record, the woman seated next to her is her mom. [ATTACH]286050[/ATTACH] Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pauledell Posted November 4, 2011 Share #10 Posted November 4, 2011 Steve, Yes this is definitely improved. Paul Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
sblitz Posted November 4, 2011 Author Share #11 Posted November 4, 2011 thanks paul -- i think the newer version looks better as well, always good to get independent confirmation. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
epand56 Posted November 4, 2011 Share #12 Posted November 4, 2011 Oh yes, the second try is much better! I like this picture, reminds me of the Fifties. Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
sblitz Posted November 5, 2011 Author Share #13 Posted November 5, 2011 thanks enrico .... i printed the photo on hahnemuhle bamboo paper, came out looking like a photo from the 30s let alone the 50s -- except for the cell phone Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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