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First Model Shoot (nudity)

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Hi,

 

From my first model shoot - please critique honestly and dont hold back.

M8 with 75 Summicron.

 

#1

[ATTACH]245228[/ATTACH]

 

 

#2

[ATTACH]245229[/ATTACH]

 

 

#3

[ATTACH]245230[/ATTACH]

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Good beginning. It is always a pleasure to try to create nude art with good taste. #1 is a little too flat emotionally and lightwise. #2 has the most potential... I would crop more on the left the the bottom. #3 did not work for me at all. Based on what you were trying to achieve in shot #1, look up Sylvie Blum's work. Hope this helps. If you like, you can look up the "fine art" category in my website and enter the password "buffy".

 

Tri:)

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I like the tension of # 1 and find myself wondering what her actual position was (perhaps leaning off a bed laying face up, or going up in a stomach crunch). I think all 3 work, but probably need some fine tuning, but I can't quite figure out what.

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Thanks.

#1 she was leaning back in a chair but her stomach wasnt very strong so she could only hold for a few seconds. The final shot has her laughing and looking at the camera which although is a good shot with more emotion, was not what I wanted.

 

Tri - your work is what I looked at a few months back but that was after the course.

 

Stu - I know what you mean. Let us see if anyone can identify the "je ne sais quoi"

 

Likalar - a landscape is what I was aiming for - maybe more Tuscany than CA :-)

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These pictures are a little bit flat IMO, they miss something, epecially # 1 and 3 where I would feel the need of light and shadow

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Enrico: Yes, I think I made too much use of the large softbox, so next time I will try more spots.

 

JCB: Actually that is flare from (I guess) the UV/IR filter and the light directed from the side. I actually like the effect.

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