Torgian Posted March 28, 2015 Share #1 Posted March 28, 2015 Advertisement (gone after registration) Lighting up in the cafe. As always, critiques and thoughts are welcome. Welcome, dear visitor! As registered member you'd see an image here… Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! 9 Quote Link to post Share on other sites Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! ' data-webShareUrl='https://www.l-camera-forum.com/topic/242884-%E5%96%AB%E8%8C%B6%E5%BA%97%E3%81%A7%E3%82%BF%E3%83%90%E3%82%B3%E3%82%92%E5%90%B8%E3%81%A3%E3%81%9F/?do=findComment&comment=2788523'>More sharing options...
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Louis Posted March 28, 2015 Share #2 Posted March 28, 2015 Number 2 is very nice. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
stuny Posted March 28, 2015 Share #3 Posted March 28, 2015 Quite a lovely set. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bill W Posted March 28, 2015 Share #4 Posted March 28, 2015 They are all lovely and she is a lovely young lady. It is probably just me but I wish she did not smoke for her own good. 3 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
otto.f Posted March 28, 2015 Share #5 Posted March 28, 2015 Number 2 is very nice. +1 It is very well balanced in composition Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pop Posted March 29, 2015 Share #6 Posted March 29, 2015 I have moved a number of replies to Barnack's Bar. Please discuss the image here and the dangers involved with the subject's lifestyle there. 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
pop Posted March 29, 2015 Share #7 Posted March 29, 2015 Advertisement (gone after registration) I would be sorely tempted to cut the window frame at the left hand side in #3. I think that's my favorite, today. I'm not particularly fond of the toning in #2, but this is just me. 2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Torgian Posted March 29, 2015 Author Share #8 Posted March 29, 2015 I'm not quite pleased with the toning either, but I'm having a hard time in lightroom trying to get a good sepia tone. Any suggestions on that? Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Louis Posted March 29, 2015 Share #9 Posted March 29, 2015 (edited) I'm not quite pleased with the toning either, but I'm having a hard time in lightroom trying to get a good sepia tone. Any suggestions on that? Why not a simple B/W?... I like this shot very much, but I agree that the tone is not ideal! But if you really insist to have a warmer tone, how about this one? Welcome, dear visitor! As registered member you'd see an image here… Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! Edited March 29, 2015 by Louis2 Quote Link to post Share on other sites Simply register for free here – We are always happy to welcome new members! ' data-webShareUrl='https://www.l-camera-forum.com/topic/242884-%E5%96%AB%E8%8C%B6%E5%BA%97%E3%81%A7%E3%82%BF%E3%83%90%E3%82%B3%E3%82%92%E5%90%B8%E3%81%A3%E3%81%9F/?do=findComment&comment=2789433'>More sharing options...
brill64 Posted March 30, 2015 Share #10 Posted March 30, 2015 no.1 sets the mood 1 Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
robert_parker Posted April 6, 2015 Share #11 Posted April 6, 2015 Has a pop-art sort of feel to it which creates a successful mood Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
JHAG Posted April 7, 2015 Share #12 Posted April 7, 2015 I'd say lack of proper verticals makes it unstable. Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest NEIL-D-WILLIAMS Posted April 11, 2015 Share #13 Posted April 11, 2015 #3 is the one for me............. it just pops Quote Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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