 |
 |
|
|
|
||||||||
| Landscape & Travel In this forum you'll find landscape and travel images made by Leica photographers. |
The Leica Camera Forum is the biggest Leica community worldwide.
Please register, if you want to use all features of the Leica Forum.
Registration is fast, simple and absolutely free!
| Tags: r50 |
 |
« Previous Thread | Next Thread » |
|
|
LinkBack | Thread Tools | Display Modes |
| Advertisement (gone after free registration) |
02/19/07, 04:30 PM
|
#2 (permalink) |
|
Moderator
Join Date: 11/08/04
Location: New York
Posts: 20,961
|
Re: Morning fog
Fernando -
Almost. This has lovely framing, mood and depth but I think it is a bit flat and needs a one degree rotation to the right, perhaps like this.... |
|
|
|
02/20/07, 12:07 PM
|
#4 (permalink) |
|
Erfahrener Benutzer
Join Date: 09/14/04
Location: Hellevoetsluis, Netherlands
Posts: 7,660
|
Re: Morning fog
I think he means that the tonal range could be improved by doing a proper B&W conversion instead of desaturating, and I agree - I think this photograph is worth the effort
 |
|
|
|
|
02/20/07, 07:00 PM
|
#6 (permalink) | |
|
Erfahrener Benutzer
Join Date: 12/27/06
Location: Nottingham, England
Posts: 307
|
Re: Morning fog
Quote:
Gerry |
|
|
|
|
|
02/22/07, 01:03 AM
|
#8 (permalink) |
|
Erfahrener Benutzer
Join Date: 03/31/04
Location: California
Posts: 2,216
|
Re: Morning fog
Fernando,
I think this is the beginning of a good composition but I find the picture has many distracting elements, none of them complimenting each other. I also agree that the tones need to be improved. Cheers, Wilfredo+ Benitez-Rivera Photography |
|
|
|
|
02/23/07, 02:29 PM
|
#10 (permalink) |
|
Erfahrener Benutzer
Join Date: 09/10/06
Posts: 9,704
|
Re: Morning fog
Fernando, do you like square format images ? If so, try this crop... From the left crop till just over the 2 or 3 trees that are behind the what seems like a pole. By this, you would have automatically moved the electricity pole to the left. A touch of contrast is also needed, to enhance it even more. More pleasing to the eye, IMHO.
Azzo |
|
|
|
|
02/23/07, 03:28 PM
|
#11 (permalink) |
|
Erfahrener Benutzer
Join Date: 03/13/05
Location: Illinois, USA
Posts: 532
|
Re: Morning fog
Fernando,
My initial impulse is to remove the radio tower and wires. And then some local burning to define the forms better. Seems to me the potential lies in emphasizing the few simple forms. I agree you've got a good foundation here. Great atmosphere, too. John |
|
|
|
|
02/24/07, 05:44 PM
|
#12 (permalink) |
|
Erfahrener Benutzer
Join Date: 09/09/05
Posts: 608
|
Re: Morning fog
Ivan,
usually I don't like square images, but there are exceptions. John, thanks for the suggestions, I will try as soon as back to home, now some days of vacation. Thanks all, and read/write you soon, Fernando. |
|
|
|
|
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Similar Threads
|
||||
| Thread | Thread Starter | Forum | Replies | Last Post |
| Small lake in morning fog Oct 2006 | thpeters | Nature & Wildlife | 3 | 10/09/06 10:21 PM |
| Spiderweb in morning fog Oct 2006 | thpeters | Nature & Wildlife | 1 | 10/08/06 12:56 PM |
| Morning fog with rising Sun Oct 2006 | thpeters | Nature & Wildlife | 0 | 10/08/06 03:21 AM |
| Spiderweb in morning fog Oct 2006 | thpeters | Nature & Wildlife | 0 | 10/08/06 02:56 AM |
| Gladiolus in morning light | cbretteville | Nature & Wildlife | 4 | 08/27/06 06:00 PM |
Linear Mode
